loved it.. your writing is lovely and the art is cute. the dialogue options are very diverse and the 'Love'/'Hurt' prompts are very intriguing and hits me right in the feels. really excited for chapter 2!
Wow, I really love the interface and all. Super spicy with the whole subject. But in fiction, I kinda love taboo subjects. Please continue. It looks to be a fantastic story!
This is quite good so far. I can already tell that this is going to be a rough ride. A very solid foundation that already has me feeling emotional. I only wish that our character had more options to be standoffish. I feel like the character caves way too easily. He was basically abandoned and ignored by the person who was his entire world for years. I was kind of looking forward to giving the brother a hard time. I thought we would be able to reject him trying to bond with us. Like you just cast the mc aside and now were all buddy buddy? I think not! Anyway, beautiful start!
thanks :) of course I’d love to add lots of routes but it’s so time consuming :( I only really get weekends to work on this game 😔 but thanks for playing
That's totally understandable. I am always amazed by interactive stories. I play a lot of text only interactive fiction games and see how a great deal of time and effort goes into making them. Then there is your game that has visuals and audio as well. I bet it is very time consuming for you. Also, my thing about the mc giving in so easily is just more of a personal preference that I have with any story. BUT I just wanted to say that you are doing an amazing job!👍
Thank u so much, take your time and we r waiting for u, thanks for making this game and for free, i appreciate ur beautiful Pixel drawings and i love them🩷🩵🩵
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loved it.. your writing is lovely and the art is cute. the dialogue options are very diverse and the 'Love'/'Hurt' prompts are very intriguing and hits me right in the feels. really excited for chapter 2!
thank you for playing 💪 im workin on it
Great game, can't wait to play the whole thing :)
thank you <3 your art is really cute btw :)
Loved this! ... Hope you continue it :)
thank you, I will
Wow, I really love the interface and all. Super spicy with the whole subject. But in fiction, I kinda love taboo subjects. Please continue. It looks to be a fantastic story!
ill do my best :) glad you like the interface
This is so nice. Any chance for a non-incest, but still happy ending?
I feel like I want to see an ending where they acknowledge each other's feelings, but choose to move on
I'm also curious about that knife and the hurt points. hehehehehe
I won't say anything about the ending but there should be two major routes
is there onlyy 1 chapter done rn?
only 1 done :(
aww I'll def be reading the next chapter tho!! :3
This is quite good so far. I can already tell that this is going to be a rough ride. A very solid foundation that already has me feeling emotional. I only wish that our character had more options to be standoffish. I feel like the character caves way too easily. He was basically abandoned and ignored by the person who was his entire world for years. I was kind of looking forward to giving the brother a hard time. I thought we would be able to reject him trying to bond with us. Like you just cast the mc aside and now were all buddy buddy? I think not! Anyway, beautiful start!
thanks :) of course I’d love to add lots of routes but it’s so time consuming :( I only really get weekends to work on this game 😔 but thanks for playing
That's totally understandable. I am always amazed by interactive stories. I play a lot of text only interactive fiction games and see how a great deal of time and effort goes into making them. Then there is your game that has visuals and audio as well. I bet it is very time consuming for you. Also, my thing about the mc giving in so easily is just more of a personal preference that I have with any story. BUT I just wanted to say that you are doing an amazing job!👍
pls tell me ur working on this 😎
I am 😆
nice! is there an eta or?
if i can stay on top of things probably updates monthly, but no promises sometimes life gets in the way :(
I´ll be loking for updates on this jajaja is great!
I dont even like graphic novels and your art got all my atention.
aw thanks I’m glad you like the art
Wow I love it!
And why can we bring knife with us...I have bad feeling🥸
thanks 😊 the knife is to uh cut cucumbers
i love it
thanks 🙏
damn, I'm really happy that I saw this. waiting for chapter 2
I clicked your creator profile and the cucumber sent me 😭
ik u'll click it, gotyaa ;)
Omg wait chapter one is done where is chapter 2 i love it so much😭😭🩷🩷
thanks umm I’m working on it :)
Thank u so much, take your time and we r waiting for u, thanks for making this game and for free, i appreciate ur beautiful Pixel drawings and i love them🩷🩵🩵
I hate that I cry easily (especially when lil bro cried, could really feel his pain there)
Either way really looking forward for more!
thanks so much
I loved it, I need more 😭💖
thanks for playing im working on it :)
It's cute! Keep it up!
thank youuuu I’ll do my best
... So when does he get kidnapped by robots?
AKSDFJL help
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
thematically not my thing, but damn if it's not really well presented. keep it up :)
thanks im still messing with twine for now :)
well for what it's worth it's presented way better than probably 99% of twine games are, haha
Pix, you absolute godsend, you've done it yet again!! Great story so far!
thank youuuu <3 I had fun making it